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April 13, 2010

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crankypants

[this is good] O lonely Funyun
abandoned among petals on the bricks
What do you mean?

Dabysan

Funyun on the street
Discarded, bagless, alone
Who will eat you now?

crankypants

dang I really thought I'd come back here and there would be 10 more Funyun poems after ours.

hotrod

Uneaten Funyun
Alone on a brick sidewalk
No flowers for you.

Dabysan

I know. I figured we'd have a trend. 

Dabysan

Since these have all been sad, how about a happy one?

Free from prison bag
A Funyun tastes liberty
blossoms mark the way

crankypants

Flowers for Funyun
byproduct of an onion
Loved by Paul Bunyan

(a rhyming haiku!)
PS I really like the bagless theme you have going on there, that made me laugh in the first one for some reason

hotrod

Heroic Funyun
Celebrated by us all
Showered with petals.

crankypants

Hey, this would qualify as a food-ku.  I don't think you joined food-ku, though did you?

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